..than you're other stuff. Cleaner lines, nice colours, cool grungy concept with metallic pieces chaotically overlapping, nice chunky\dirty font with your 12L. Probably could put your own spin on it (accessories, attachments, different coloured panels?) so it's a bit less 'generic' in feel.

You could also play with the transparency on the vehicles windows, good chance to introduce more colour (currently windows blend in with the tyres a bit)

:)

Marty