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Some recent creature sketches I have done

Submitted by cwans art on

Hi there,

I have posted a 'looking for work' post not so long ago in this forum. Since then I have done a lot of personal works, all to improve and STILL looking for any type of work! :P

Anywayz, my sketches... any crits would be awesome as I wanna improve more.
[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/cwans_art/200410631948_NEW_003hy…]
[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/cwans_art/200410632044_NEW_001hy…]

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/cwans_art/200410634632_40102Art_…]

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/cwans_art/200410634753_0021.jpg[…]

Submitted by conundrum on Thu, 07/10/04 - 4:17 AM Permalink

they are all really great sketches and concepts, your shading and characterisation is really effective but seeing as you want crits ill try my best.

- on the first image, try to make sure that the parts of the body further from the camera are smaller than the front, i find the larger right hand quite distracting.
- the stomach of the second one has too many muscles of equal value, try either using less mucles or punch out the important ones and recede the lesser ones more to make it less cluttered.
- the third could probably do with a few more crisp lines as a soft airbruch can look too blurry at times.
-the final image might also need more sharp lines in either the rider or bike to seperate them a bit more.

thats all though, to tell you the truth i wouldn't be able to draw and paint this well, my crits are just what ive read in various threads around the place. on the whole, these are some great images, i really like the frog and the biker in particular, keep it up.

Posted by cwans art on

Hi there,

I have posted a 'looking for work' post not so long ago in this forum. Since then I have done a lot of personal works, all to improve and STILL looking for any type of work! :P

Anywayz, my sketches... any crits would be awesome as I wanna improve more.
[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/cwans_art/200410631948_NEW_003hy…]
[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/cwans_art/200410632044_NEW_001hy…]

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/cwans_art/200410634632_40102Art_…]

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/forum/attached/cwans_art/200410634753_0021.jpg[…]


Submitted by conundrum on Thu, 07/10/04 - 4:17 AM Permalink

they are all really great sketches and concepts, your shading and characterisation is really effective but seeing as you want crits ill try my best.

- on the first image, try to make sure that the parts of the body further from the camera are smaller than the front, i find the larger right hand quite distracting.
- the stomach of the second one has too many muscles of equal value, try either using less mucles or punch out the important ones and recede the lesser ones more to make it less cluttered.
- the third could probably do with a few more crisp lines as a soft airbruch can look too blurry at times.
-the final image might also need more sharp lines in either the rider or bike to seperate them a bit more.

thats all though, to tell you the truth i wouldn't be able to draw and paint this well, my crits are just what ive read in various threads around the place. on the whole, these are some great images, i really like the frog and the biker in particular, keep it up.