Activity #1 - IronhideNT

Submitted by IronhideNT on
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Alright, I've been keeping an eye on this one, and finally I've gone and done something!

My character is meant to be a type of young ace pilot from the world war 2 period (or something).
[img]http://www-personal.monash.edu.au/~ntom3/pics/colourpilot2.jpg[/img]

It's abit rough round the edges, but any comments or critisims would be much appreciated!

Thanks!

Submitted by J I Styles on Mon, 26/01/04 - 8:28 PM Permalink

Nice stuff, I love the subject [:)]

few points - First obvious design stuff, don't think there were too many pink haired female fighter pilots, but hey I may be wrong [:D] and it's obviously a very conscious design decision.

Past that, one other thing sticks out, that's the "ace" part - To be an ace pilot the first thing that sticks out in my mind is she'd of had to have piloted many successful missions - she looks very under-decorated for that. That's a fairly nit-picky crit though [:)]

Submitted by smeg on Mon, 26/01/04 - 10:49 PM Permalink

Looks cool. She needs a pair of those huge / novelty anime goggles.

The only thing i'd suggest is fattening up those fingers - yes, she is a female, but those gloves look pretty chunky.

cheers

Submitted by MoonUnit on Tue, 27/01/04 - 6:15 AM Permalink

i love the gloves personally, if its not the goggles then i think those gloves give the cartoony pilot feel that seems to be wut u were after here

the pink hair and female isnt really WW2 as has been allready mentioned but its still a nice novelty

Submitted by Makk on Tue, 27/01/04 - 6:45 AM Permalink

Looks pretty cool. Cant really say much that hasnt been said. Although the bridge of her nose is a little small

Posted by IronhideNT on
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Alright, I've been keeping an eye on this one, and finally I've gone and done something!

My character is meant to be a type of young ace pilot from the world war 2 period (or something).
[img]http://www-personal.monash.edu.au/~ntom3/pics/colourpilot2.jpg[/img]

It's abit rough round the edges, but any comments or critisims would be much appreciated!

Thanks!

Submitted by J I Styles on Mon, 26/01/04 - 8:28 PM Permalink

Nice stuff, I love the subject [:)]

few points - First obvious design stuff, don't think there were too many pink haired female fighter pilots, but hey I may be wrong [:D] and it's obviously a very conscious design decision.

Past that, one other thing sticks out, that's the "ace" part - To be an ace pilot the first thing that sticks out in my mind is she'd of had to have piloted many successful missions - she looks very under-decorated for that. That's a fairly nit-picky crit though [:)]

Submitted by smeg on Mon, 26/01/04 - 10:49 PM Permalink

Looks cool. She needs a pair of those huge / novelty anime goggles.

The only thing i'd suggest is fattening up those fingers - yes, she is a female, but those gloves look pretty chunky.

cheers

Submitted by MoonUnit on Tue, 27/01/04 - 6:15 AM Permalink

i love the gloves personally, if its not the goggles then i think those gloves give the cartoony pilot feel that seems to be wut u were after here

the pink hair and female isnt really WW2 as has been allready mentioned but its still a nice novelty

Submitted by Makk on Tue, 27/01/04 - 6:45 AM Permalink

Looks pretty cool. Cant really say much that hasnt been said. Although the bridge of her nose is a little small