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Activity #2 2d - Hazard

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  • Hey everyone,

    Long time I havent been around here! I just thought i would show something that ive been working on for the past few weeks in my spare time.

    Hope you enjoy!

    Shes not a game model, no polycount limits and no…

Submitted by HazarD on
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Heres my first blast, kind of a speed blot. I posted the same pic in the other thread! [:I]

Eyes are a bit high on the head, need to come down a tad. Im going to add a bit more personality into his face, give him some life in the next revision.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/219_qtarn.jpg[/img]

Submitted by Makk on Fri, 25/06/04 - 8:14 AM Permalink

Good start. Not much to crit apart from what has been said.
Will you be doing the final version traditional or digital?

Submitted by Aven on Sat, 26/06/04 - 6:05 PM Permalink

Looking cool. Just needs a bg :)

Submitted by Makk on Sun, 27/06/04 - 12:51 AM Permalink

Some good colour work in there, are you going to leave some linework there or paint over the top of it?
I would probably elimanite the wrinkle lines at the sides of his mouth area and lift the edges of his lips so he isnt got that frowning look on him. Also, maybe adjust his eyes so he is looking at the viewer, at the moment he looks like he is looking at my chest not my eyes.

Submitted by Kalescent on Sun, 27/06/04 - 1:07 AM Permalink

Good point Makk thanks ! Will fix up the eyes.

Yeah im going to completely remove all the line work etc,and get to some smooth airbrushing. [:)]

Ill probably keep the sour look - but might make the lines from his nose down past the sides of his mouth a little less prominent.

Submitted by Johnn on Sun, 27/06/04 - 4:01 AM Permalink

Yeah, never make the cut as one of santa's elves with an expression like that!
Eyes looking at the viewer would be more engaging, or alternatively looking to one side past the viewer.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Sun, 27/06/04 - 5:42 AM Permalink

looking good cept for the previously mentioned eye thing and personally i think his nose is maybe a tad too long (vertically). maybe bring the eye line (along with the top of the nose) down a tad... well thats just a thought, i could be entirely wrong but its something my subconcious picked up.

oh and nice colours :D

Submitted by Anuxinamoon on Tue, 29/06/04 - 3:10 AM Permalink

hey troy when r u gonna post the newest version of him up? and if ur going to keep the cloack on him i suggest putting some more folds in it as it looks very non-cloth like.
but the face colours are nice. :)

Submitted by denz on Tue, 29/06/04 - 6:02 AM Permalink

Nice work hazard [:)] The skin looks really good. He looks like he's wearing a hoody heh.

Submitted by Kalescent on Wed, 30/06/04 - 9:05 AM Permalink

Thanks for the comments guys, Ive cleaned up the linework quite a bit and begane painting the final version but have yet to get some good piece of time set aside to complete it, will upload as soon as its done tho [:D]

Posted by HazarD on
Forum

Heres my first blast, kind of a speed blot. I posted the same pic in the other thread! [:I]

Eyes are a bit high on the head, need to come down a tad. Im going to add a bit more personality into his face, give him some life in the next revision.

[img]http://www.sumea.com.au/simages2/219_qtarn.jpg[/img]


Submitted by Makk on Fri, 25/06/04 - 8:14 AM Permalink

Good start. Not much to crit apart from what has been said.
Will you be doing the final version traditional or digital?

Submitted by Aven on Sat, 26/06/04 - 6:05 PM Permalink

Looking cool. Just needs a bg :)

Submitted by Makk on Sun, 27/06/04 - 12:51 AM Permalink

Some good colour work in there, are you going to leave some linework there or paint over the top of it?
I would probably elimanite the wrinkle lines at the sides of his mouth area and lift the edges of his lips so he isnt got that frowning look on him. Also, maybe adjust his eyes so he is looking at the viewer, at the moment he looks like he is looking at my chest not my eyes.

Submitted by Kalescent on Sun, 27/06/04 - 1:07 AM Permalink

Good point Makk thanks ! Will fix up the eyes.

Yeah im going to completely remove all the line work etc,and get to some smooth airbrushing. [:)]

Ill probably keep the sour look - but might make the lines from his nose down past the sides of his mouth a little less prominent.

Submitted by Johnn on Sun, 27/06/04 - 4:01 AM Permalink

Yeah, never make the cut as one of santa's elves with an expression like that!
Eyes looking at the viewer would be more engaging, or alternatively looking to one side past the viewer.

Submitted by MoonUnit on Sun, 27/06/04 - 5:42 AM Permalink

looking good cept for the previously mentioned eye thing and personally i think his nose is maybe a tad too long (vertically). maybe bring the eye line (along with the top of the nose) down a tad... well thats just a thought, i could be entirely wrong but its something my subconcious picked up.

oh and nice colours :D

Submitted by Anuxinamoon on Tue, 29/06/04 - 3:10 AM Permalink

hey troy when r u gonna post the newest version of him up? and if ur going to keep the cloack on him i suggest putting some more folds in it as it looks very non-cloth like.
but the face colours are nice. :)

Submitted by denz on Tue, 29/06/04 - 6:02 AM Permalink

Nice work hazard [:)] The skin looks really good. He looks like he's wearing a hoody heh.

Submitted by Kalescent on Wed, 30/06/04 - 9:05 AM Permalink

Thanks for the comments guys, Ive cleaned up the linework quite a bit and begane painting the final version but have yet to get some good piece of time set aside to complete it, will upload as soon as its done tho [:D]