untiteled graphic novel

Submitted by Alti on
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Work in progress

a freind of mine wanted me to show some of you my new project.

[IMG]http://members.optusnet.com.au/drummonds/prac/city copy.jpg[/IMG]

story on this page, as well as some ink.

[IMG]http://members.optusnet.com.au/drummonds/prac/pg2.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://…]

thoughts feedback critic all welcome.

Submitted by Kalescent on Wed, 12/01/05 - 11:56 PM Permalink

Love It! you finally putting together a comic alti ?

Submitted by Alti on Thu, 13/01/05 - 1:52 AM Permalink

yes, it felt about the time to do a comic, i know some publishers now so it should be ok.

Submitted by conundrum on Thu, 13/01/05 - 1:06 PM Permalink

really nice work, i have always loved your style and its cool to see you attempting a comic book . no real crits other than the font, the normal comic lettering doesnt seem fit your work, not sure what you can do to fix it, but for me it detracts from the feeling of the images. other than that its great and ill be looking forward to some more pages

Submitted by mcdrewski on Thu, 13/01/05 - 8:54 PM Permalink

damn nice work - you've got that gritty techno-leper feel down sweetly.

I'm happy to review the textual content before you spend the hours integrating it into the art if you'd like - i notice a couple of grammar things that you might want to tweak (ie: your/you're etc.)

-d

Submitted by Aven on Thu, 13/01/05 - 10:25 PM Permalink

Really cool work as usual Alti. I have to admit that the font looks a little out. It just doesn't have the gritty feel of your art.

Posted by Alti on
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Work in progress

a freind of mine wanted me to show some of you my new project.

[IMG]http://members.optusnet.com.au/drummonds/prac/city copy.jpg[/IMG]

story on this page, as well as some ink.

[IMG]http://members.optusnet.com.au/drummonds/prac/pg2.jpg[/IMG][IMG]http://…]

thoughts feedback critic all welcome.

Submitted by Kalescent on Wed, 12/01/05 - 11:56 PM Permalink

Love It! you finally putting together a comic alti ?

Submitted by Alti on Thu, 13/01/05 - 1:52 AM Permalink

yes, it felt about the time to do a comic, i know some publishers now so it should be ok.

Submitted by conundrum on Thu, 13/01/05 - 1:06 PM Permalink

really nice work, i have always loved your style and its cool to see you attempting a comic book . no real crits other than the font, the normal comic lettering doesnt seem fit your work, not sure what you can do to fix it, but for me it detracts from the feeling of the images. other than that its great and ill be looking forward to some more pages

Submitted by mcdrewski on Thu, 13/01/05 - 8:54 PM Permalink

damn nice work - you've got that gritty techno-leper feel down sweetly.

I'm happy to review the textual content before you spend the hours integrating it into the art if you'd like - i notice a couple of grammar things that you might want to tweak (ie: your/you're etc.)

-d

Submitted by Aven on Thu, 13/01/05 - 10:25 PM Permalink

Really cool work as usual Alti. I have to admit that the font looks a little out. It just doesn't have the gritty feel of your art.